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Hello, Hello?

Are you there?
You seem to listen;
You seem to care;
You always seem to be there.

I don't deserve you
'cause I'm not there for you,
Though I wish I could be.

You deserve better, but please
Let me be there for you;
Care for you;
Listen to you

Though I don't deserve it,
Please forgive me again.
I'll try to be there for you
Like you're there for me.

Hello, Hello?

I Love You.
This is for a friend of mine who I feel like I'm not there for. I'm sorry :(
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RenosGirl77 Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Just from reading this, it sounds like you are most certainly there for them!! You care, and that's the most important thing. I'm sure they know. :)
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thechosenonee1 Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you (: I try to be there for her, but I don't feel like I am
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:iconrenosgirl77:
RenosGirl77 Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
It's no problem. :) Has she read your poem?
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thechosenonee1 Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2013  Student Writer
Yeah (:
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RenosGirl77 Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Good good, in that case I'm positive she knows that you're there for her, even if you feel like you're not. :)
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Freezingsteelmurder Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2013  Student General Artist
i am here vuv HUG :iconoldschoolownedplz: :iconsnugglyplz: :iconbrohugplz: :icontighthugplz:
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thechosenonee1 Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2013  Student Writer
DON'T HUG ME INTO THAT WATER!
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Freezingsteelmurder Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2013  Student General Artist
too BAD
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thechosenonee1 Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2013  Student Writer
Dammit
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Freezingsteelmurder Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2013  Student General Artist
who was this one 4?
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