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"Hey! How are you?"

I'm bad,
Tired,
Hurt,
Depressed,
Alone,
Stressed,
Regretful,
Disconcerting,
Frozen to the core,
Broken,
Ready to cry some more,
Lonely,
Crushed,
Cold,
Life is just rushed...
Defeated,
In so much pain,
Feeling cheated,
Life has no gain,
Not  good enough,
Worthless,
Life is just so rough,
A failure,
No one could care less,
Sorry for complaining so much,
Sorry for being selfish and such,

"I'm fine, thanks for asking! And how are you?"
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How are you?by thechosenonee1

Literature / Poetry / Emotional / Free Verse©2013-2015 thechosenonee1
The truth...
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:icont-j-a-y-e:
T-J-A-Y-E Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
True, sadly not many people think that I could feel that way...
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:iconbeanieboot:
beanieboot Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2013
*hugs and more hugs*
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:iconthechosenonee1:
thechosenonee1 Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2013  Student Writer
thanks c:
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:iconjcpotterf123:
jcpotterf123 Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Me everyday :( But I'm learning to deal with it because now I'm pessimistic
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:icontwisted-curiosity:
Twisted-Curiosity Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2013  Student
I hate that question. Because no one really wants to know the truth. That's why when someone asks me that, I just glare at them. I like the poem, it's cool.
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:iconrenosgirl77:
RenosGirl77 Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Wow. I think everyone alive can sympathise with this. *hugs* Hope you feel better soon. "As long as there will be rain, there will be clear skies after" :)

See if, for one day only, everyone on the planet actually answered that question truthfully, I think so many problems could be solved. It'd probably stop a lot of wars.
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:iconmiuru-chan:
Miuru-chan Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013
Sometimes I feel same way... It's not fun feeling that way.
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:iconmystiqueechoes:
MystiqueEchoes Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I know the feeling. *pat*
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:iconask-bill-grey:
Ask-Bill-Grey Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013
I'm feelin' pretty good rightly ^^
And I don't lie.
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:icond-murasai:
D-Murasai Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2013
Hells yes...
I get so sick of that question..
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:icongettofox16:
gettofox16 Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2013
this.....is........:iconcannotevenplz:
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:iconxapplegatex:
xApplegatex Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2013  Student Filmographer
I can't even tell you how much I can relate to this at the moment.
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:iconcordaizee:
CorDaiZee Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This is great... So effective
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:iconthechosenonee1:
thechosenonee1 Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2013  Student Writer
Thanks :3
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:iconasymmetrical-wings:
asymmetrical-wings Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
WOW EFFECTIVE POETRY
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:iconjiingle:
Jiingle Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2013
so true .-.
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:iconmockingjay1256:
MockingJay1256 Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
'The truth...' And nothing but it.
Love this poem. <3
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:icona-nother-fan:
a-Nother-fan Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013
yeah, that's about right...
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:icon4evercrazy:
4evercrazy Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013
thanks for asking I could be better and how are u?
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:iconxchanxoligox:
XChanxOligoX Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
im hanging in there, thanks for asking! :3
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:iconlthawkins:
lthawkins Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013
:D "I'm fine" is the answer that implies all of this, anyway. XD
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:icondemonbarber14:
demonbarber14 Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013
So very true! We can never truly know what another person is feeling, can we? Fantastic job!
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:iconxyllem:
xyllem Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013
Ikr?! Why would anyone ask if they know the answer?
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:iconcoldplay-girl13:
Coldplay-Girl13 Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013  Student Writer
So. TRUE.
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:iconnichansu14:
NiCHaNsU14 Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
this goes so well with a drawing of mine :star:[link] :star:
You just described my whole life in beautiful words!!! Keep up the great work!!! :icongrin--plz:
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:iconluffy0001:
Luffy0001 Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
That is how it is usually.
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:iconmanga1935:
manga1935 Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
my life behind my plastic smile
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:iconredhedsaysrawr:
redhedsaysrawr Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013  Student Artisan Crafter
I see stuff like this a lot, but with yours, the added rhyme scheme, and just all the extra little emotions tied in with it, it seems so much better than any of the other Tumblr, Facebook, Photo, and Instagram posts out there. Beautiful piece of work.
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:iconlozrocksmysocks77:
LOZRocksmysocks77 Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013
I'm tired but doing pretty good! Thanks for asking. =D
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:iconmorcav:
MorCav Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013  Student
wow, this is so true.
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:iconlolitsmike:
lolitsmike Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013
My life in a nutshell
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:iconrawrsrus:
RawrsRUs Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013
I can relate to how you're feeling. At a time when I was feeling really stressed, I wrote a similar poem.
It may be difficult to believe, but maybe you're not as selfish and whiny as you depicted in your poem.
Go ahead and let your complaints out. If there's any way that I could help, just ask.
Feel free to talk to me. I'd welcome you as a friend. ^-^
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:iconthechosenonee1:
thechosenonee1 Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2013  Student Writer
Thanks ^^
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:iconmaplegoodness:
MapleGoodness Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
yes so very true 3:
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:iconrosieholiday23:
RosieHoliday23 Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013  Student General Artist
In all honesty, I've been dealing with the same thing. All I had to do was tell the truth and now I have all this support from the people around me to get better. If you want a change, speak up and go for it!
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ScraptorProductions Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013  Student Digital Artist
..mhm sometimes people cant handle how you really feel, and you must tell them what they want to hear. its just life
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:iconscootaloocuteness:
scootaloocuteness Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
That's how I feel yet can't tell no one I have to lie to everyone who ask stupid people that should know somethings up they see my scars everyday yet no one says no to my answer wham they ask if I'm ok
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LivelovelifeEleni Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
How bout a change?
Recovering
optimism
strength
pride
hope
cheerfulness <3 /D
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:iconrosieholiday23:
RosieHoliday23 Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013  Student General Artist
amen sista
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:iconlivelovelifeeleni:
LivelovelifeEleni Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
and surviving ;D
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:iconlivelovelifeeleni:
LivelovelifeEleni Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
BECAUSE YOU ARE GETTING THERE
AND YOU CAN DO IT!
I am proud you were brave to write out all that you feel
and if you need someone to talk to, I am always here <3
have a good day -hug-
I JUST WANNA HUG YOUU
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NightKyoBlack Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
But there's also:

Recovering
Coping
Thinking
Socializing
Talking
Smiling
Laughing
Liking
Enjoying
Loving life
Loving friends and family
Being happy
Forgetting the past
Moving on to the future.
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:iconrosieholiday23:
RosieHoliday23 Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013  Student General Artist
The way it should be! :D
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:iconhavingadream31:
HavingADream31 Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013
It's sad yet beautifully true... :happycry:
LOVE :iconilavplz:
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AzuriaZyfire Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
I feel the need to post this with all these "i'm sad" poetry pieces:

Yeah, being a teenager sucks. We've all been there. School sucks, yeah. But you know what? You graduate and none of that stuff ever matters again.

To all those depressed: Only you can help yourself. Unless you take the initiative to getting yourself feeling better (talking to a councilor, getting medication, etc), you will be stuck in that hole forever. I was depressed largely for my teenage years, but I sought out help and am much better because of it.
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:iconwildwooddancing:
wildwooddancing Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
kind of my life right now. i want change.
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:icondbzlover101:
DBZLOVER101 Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
it really is true, i go through it every single damn cursed day. :\

lovely work by the way! it speaks to us!
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:iconthechosenonee1:
thechosenonee1 Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013  Student Writer
Thanks :3
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:icondbzlover101:
DBZLOVER101 Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
your welcome c:
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:icontsukia-kari:
tsukia-KARI Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013  Student Digital Artist
All the hate on this makes me sad. Where's the respect for people suffering from mental illnesses? They're as valid as something like diabetes, cancer, heart disease, etc.
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